Thanks to people bearing with me and yes I know I try and rush things so it often appears as a bunch of unedited words.
I have a few hours writing today to still fit in. I might make 24K words tonight and a lot of time has been spent on story revision and a few more edits and finally I’m onto Sir Charles Dastry arriving in Toshonia and trying to build up his troops to kill King Martan and now he cannot find his SpyMaster.
One A4 of scenarios to go that I thought I’d be onto by now; no-way.
I’m still on Sir Charles Dastry and his part of the story, and then, with a lot of luck, I might get further on Alisia’s escape.
Laseith getting thrown out of Dagril with Arturo ending up at Du Storme castle took far too much time as did she trying to break into the birth chamber to ensure the child died.
I will try and post something later and it will be about 80 pages with most edited and including the revisions to the story and words.