#amwriting #amediting Alisia

As the Alisia plot is developing, I intend to leave it for a while to concentrate on the maps and Mi Kee I will give some more details of the future for Alisia.

Alisia actually tried to fool King Martan, thinking that if she became pregnant he would not marry Princess Roulani.

Martan did not want a child as it complicated things and he decided her escape would be her death-trap or at the very least a miscarriage.

He knew Sir Charles had troops in the forests to the west of Matira but it was too close to comfort for him to arrange her own death.

Instead the idea was move across country on a horse for some forty miles whilst word of her leaving was released to the remaining spies of Sir Charles to make her rush. The troops are as much a sacrifice as anyone, and Jinny has started to realise that.

In this she is aided by the tantrums of Alisia who deliberately slows them down and that is fairly obvious: eventually; something King Martan, who she trusts and thinks she can manipulate, had told her to slow everything down and make sure Sir Charles and his troops caught her and then she would be free to have the child!

I’ll attach sketched maps.

Taken out a lot of times on maps. I thought they might go as far as Dagril and Mi Kee; still working on ideas and ideas but above on the maps as I think and understand the world I created.

Dave

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About Dave Page

I'm now working on Astoria. Sci-Fi/Mix of Future and Past. Dwarvia decides to rid herself of several hundred thousand Prisoners plus Dwarfs who've made the mistake of falling out of favour - big-time. Published books: Parky's Lunch, Afters and Teamtime, and Magic Midnight are the books in the Parky's espionage series. FYOG - Don't Wait Up and I May Be A Long Time are the two books in the FYOG series. The Good, The Bad, And The Awful Poetry Book is not that awful and all available on Amazon. Dave served with the Royal Navy for 8 years including 2 years in an ex Japanese Execution Camp in Singapore before embarking on a career of Accountancy and IT lasting some 40 years in Europe, the UK and the Far East before writing. During his Royal Naval Service Dave represented 500 guys on a Welfare Committee for two years and worked on two Royal Tournaments including putting up pay with the Bagpipes practising in front of his office and the RAF Dogs joining in behind him. Leaving the Royal Navy Dave worked in a Funfair and a Pub of the Year in London. Born in London, Dave lived in Chelsea for 10 years and now lives in Gloucester. Dave on Amazon is https://www.amazon.com/author/davepage
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